I am a Year 8 student at Tauranga Intermediate School, New Zealand.
I don't really get some of the words in there like attack, and you need to work on the ending like silly, I don't get how a tree is silly but otherwise its good.
You followed the structure correctly. It looks like you changed your poem from when Sophia commented?
I don't really get some of the words in there like attack, and you need to work on the ending like silly, I don't get how a tree is silly but otherwise its good.
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